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Chapter: Chapter 11
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Art: Kooroiwwa
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Art: Kooroiwwa
The faces will take some time getting used to.
Not a fan of the new art design, just looks wrong.
It just looks wrong, I liked the old design way more than this one.
I like the new art. I think my only criticism thus far is that the white highlighting can make the characters look a bit too shiny sometimes.
Thank you. It’ll take some getting used to but I feel that people will warm up to the art moving forward and that it will get better once the artist gets more comfortable.
Why do they all have the same pink/red eye color? Jameson’s eyes are blue, Kennedy’s are green, and Cheryls are purple.
Sorry for the inconsistencies. New artist so the transition is going to take a little tweaking.
I am not a fan of the new art direction. It makes the characters to … excessively beautiful for my taste.
The previous art direction was very anime but at the same time it showed off the character’s individual traits better. The new direction in my opinion causes the character traits to blend a bit to much.
But I am just someone enjoying the story.
The new art looks.. really bad. And for a porn comic looks are everything.
Will take a bit to get used to the new way of inking the faces…but I think it shouldn’t be too bad after all. 🙂
Still looking forward to more!
It’s always strange in comics when there’s an artist shift and at first it’s jarring but give it time for Kooroiwwa to settle in and things will improve. If leaving criticism make it constructive, not just “I don’t like it”.
I think the art looks good and has potential to look great for the steamy scenes, bar a few nitpicks mentioned above (the shininess and individual traits). Sort those out and it’ll be great.
Story wise nice that Jameson accepts Kennedy for who she is, as we all knew he would, while he isn’t into the D I’m sure the other thralls wouldn’t mind a try, Cheryl to assert dominance and XTC for “research”.
But boy they’ve been busy, the last four or five chapters and this one all taking place on the same day.
Eh… The change will take a little getting used to, but as someone who grew up reading Marvel and DC Comics, where they would regularly change artists mid arc, it doesn’t really bother me… As long as the writing doesn’t change, because I really enjoy the story, and I’m excited to see what happens in this chapter!
Thank you!